Monday, December 12, 2016

Whispers, Just Whispers Comments

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Whispers, whispers, in my sleep
Imagination oh so deep
Toss and turn, throw off the bedclothes
Thrashing around, reaching out
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John A'Hern
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Bri Edwards 30 December 2018

Lying there soaking..., not Laying there... hee-hee and probably from whom, not from who. ....but maybe i'm being picky, ESPECIALLY since even I, Bri, don't follow all the 'rules' of English which i once was taught and graded on. One rule was to never end a sentence with a preposition [such as on]. I'm not sure i understand completely; i do NOT, but i like the poem. To MyPoemList. it seems more is going on here than dreams! bri (:

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John Ahern 30 December 2018

Hi, wise one, my English/Welsh Teacher would be so proud of my attempt to destroy the English language. The Welsh take great delight in confusing the meaning of words. Well noted on more going on than just dreams. Thank you for taking the time to read this poem.

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