Saturday, July 1, 2017

White Earth Comments

Rating: 4.5

Green brownness
in soundless retreat
stung by the savage stride
of the ravenous cityscape.
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Yasmin Sawhney
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2017

Mock slogans ‘Save the Earth'...yes, we slogans only to save the earth but actually we do not take care of her, instead of this we do harm to her by cutting trees and polluting environment. It is a beautiful poem on environment which can bring consciousness to readers. Thanks for sharing.

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Akram Saqib 01 July 2017

though you are indian but i appreciate your poem, it inspired me to praise your words

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 July 2017

Write comment. We are guilty. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2017

in soundless retreat dart the defenseless Earth-breast yes we are turning the face of earth pale... we are callous. we destroy nature, the earth, the enviornement. we all want money, money.... we will do everything for that.......... what a terrible world. your words are conscientising the world. than k you for opening the eyes of the reader through ur verses. tony

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Yasmin Sawhney

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