Tuesday, July 25, 2006

White Spot Comments

Rating: 4.8

One ear up, with a funny grin
Eye's wide, hair on his chin
white spot on the forehead
bridal hanging in the shed
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David Darbyshire
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Dee Daffodil 25 July 2006

What a lovely Summer poem Dave! Hugs, Dee

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Patricia Gale 25 July 2006

A cute little tale with rhyme!

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Ray Forever 25 July 2006

WHat did she do to the horse that he was laughing all the way? ! ! lol

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Anjana Aravind 25 July 2006

What a wonderful vision. I wish I had a horse. Beautiful poem. Anjana

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Nalini Hebbar 25 July 2006

what a lovely pair...both eat straw! ! ! ...could she charm the horse to drink the water? ...love...nalini

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