Who Am I *redone* Poem by Scarred Unknown

Who Am I *redone*

Rating: 3.5


Who am I?
I am what you see me as
Gothic prep ugly or pretty
I am as you see
You can decide who I am
Whether or not it’s me
You make up your mind
before you get a chance to see
Well here you are...
THIS IS ME!

I write out how I feel
I say what I think
And feel how I feel

Out side these safe walls
I walk the streets
People will look and decide,
They think they know me,
But they are wrong
for no one can see.

I ask a question
Is there a real me?
Or am I just a mirror
Of what you see
I’m slipping away from everything
I’m not sure if I know me

I try to please you all
But in doing so I loose myself
Now I’m sitting here wondering
Who am I?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sean Buchsbaum 07 November 2006

BEGINING WAS REAL REAL good but then you go in several different directions a little to fast, and it kinda loses flow

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