Who Sees Me? ....God Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

(cont.) back•sto•ry /ˈbakˌstôrē/ noun noun: back-story 1. a history or background, especially one created for a fictional character in a motion picture or television program (cont.)

well, i'm hear, i've read it (once) , so i might as well comment. this is not nearly as clear to me as some of yours, L.P. perhaps some symbolism here? or is it a spiritual aspect about the poem which causes me to wonder what to say? Is me the voyeur? ? i got in trouble for that once! ! ! well, almost. but, ha ha, i wasn't caught! (cont.) (cont.)

(cont.) it seems one would have to be 'discovered' in order to be forgotten, but maybe.....yeah, ok, in a sense. the back story line stifles my thought. ok, not really; stifling me would take more than that! ! ! but back story is a new name for me; i'm not familiar with the term. (cont.)

(cont.) i'll say so long for now, unless i can't keep myself from reading another of yours now, but.........i've got more catching up to do responding via private messages to readers who've commented on my poems. bri (:

(cont.) i think most of the rest of my lost comments from yesterday had to do with me trying to be funny. e.g. i was saying i would like to enter a lift/elevator with naked members of the Dallas Cowboys (football team) cheer leading squad. i think they are all females. (cont.)

(cont.) try to avoid this by stopping the lines movement; but i think this trick times-out, on some poem pages but not all. another trick is to copy and paste poem somewhere 'safe' and typing a comment to it and THEN copying and pasting the comment, in sections if need be, into the comment box on the poem's page. sometimes i wonder if PH intentionally is trying to try our nerves! ! ! (cont.)

I'M BACK! i rarely see responses to my comments unless they are sent to me as a message, as i rarely return to a poem page after i finish submitting comments. but i read your responses (below) and think i can help. now i am typing on this page when your whole poem is NOT SHOWING, and no audio is playing and no line of color is traveling from left to right! ! ! it is when a line is moving and audio playing that the page flips. (cont.)

well, Lodigiana, i THINK i've succeeded in sending TWO segments of my comment, but one or two (or 3) others seem to have disappeared into cyberspace. it's partly my fault because i trusted PH and myself to do it correctly, and i did not type it somewhere else where it would be less likely to be LOST! ! MAYBE i'll submit more later. bri (: