Who Should I Write Poem by Prasetya Utama

Who Should I Write



When I want to write history
Apparently there are many facets that must be written
Side of the Master, winner of the war
Side of Mr. Small, who lost the war

But his position could be reversed
Mr. Little and Mr. Big winners who lost
Winning and losing in war is common
But the victim is always

the common people, who have sacrificed everything
gentlemen for gentlemen
or a victim of the ideas that are still abstract
the problem is not that common people

clothing, food, shelter
and education

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tiernan Watson 22 June 2012

I like this poem. This sounds like it relates to what developed countries would call the third - world. I have not experienced this personally as I do not live in these locations. But I still feel sorry and do whatever I can to help these people. I like how you wrote it! Well done.

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Simon Odhiambo 22 June 2012

'clothing, food, shelter and education' The carrots that we follow to our end...as we lose to the master Winning we celebrate with every food we eat, every cloth we wear If and only if we are not the victims Good poem

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