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Bravo! What a great and well crafted write that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! This is a thought provoking write that deserves a 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City1

Not bad...I think you are naturally good at expressing what you are trying to say, but you should perhaps try to add more depth in your writing, just an advice though. Cheers =)