Monday, September 15, 2025

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Tell me what to do
Bit off more than I can chew
Should I swallow it
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Rob Lamberton
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M.J. Lemon 16 September 2025

Brilliant verse, Rob. It goes to myfavourites. I do, however, think that anything too big to chew, either real or metaphorical, should not be swallowed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2025

Brilliantly crafted and impactful.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2025

You should not take more than you can handle. A clever poem that provokes the mind and gives emphasis to the idiom: ' Do not bite off more than you can chew'.

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