Why Poem by mary das

Why

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My dear friend....
why the silence?
i know not
speak up....
for i will understand

my dear friend....
why the coldness?
i know not
share with me
for i will enlighten your burden

my dear friend....
why the silence?
it's killing me
trust me
for i will be a shoulder to lean

my dear friend....
why the coldness?
it's breaking my heart
tears rolling down on my cheeks
still wondering..... why?

Monday, November 27, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: coldness,friend,silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 21 March 2007

It's difficult to stand by and let a friendship dissolve without knowing why... it is both unfair and hurtful. Very well expressed... good write, Mary. Brian

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Jibin Joseph 27 January 2007

i agree it sure hurts........ the coldness of ur friend....... great emotions potrayed wishes jibin

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Cyclopseven R 26 December 2006

This is a good piece buddy. But, at times there things that goes just like the wind which cannot be locked in order to be shared with any.

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