Why does everything
always fall apart
right in front of my eyes
And all the lies that I hold inside,
you've been wanting to know them,
and why I won't cry
and why I'd rather die.
it's because, my life has been so complicated,
instead of sedated,
and you still wonder why I have anger
It's all towards my mother
and my father
It's all my fault
they left me,
because, I wasn't good enough.
Why did I even try
You've expressed your feelings well Tori, there's an under tone to your words, that gives this impressive piece a great impact....keep expressing my friend...you have a gift for poetry....I like your style 10
and you still wonder why I have anger It's all towards my mother and my father It's all my fault they left me, because, I wasn't good enough. Why did I even try i get where you're coming from.. i have so much built up inside of me and i just try to be strong.. i try my best not to cry... and i have so much anger.. and it's towards my mother.. she was never there for me, she just left me and i always felt like it was my fault and like i was never good enough.. your'e sucha good writer... keep it up...10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very good use of words expressing your feelings...It clear and very open...