Tuesday, September 1, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

i remember all the times we spent together
now we don't even talk to each other
we were such great friends
when we tried something new
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susan brealey
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Adi Cox 02 November 2009

You write this sad poem well. You get your feelings across in your writting very well, as you express your disappointment. Hopefully you will be uploading some more poems.10/10.

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Gold Fish 09 October 2009

I can totally relate to your situation described in the poem. I've been there and it's not worth it. Such extremes! Thanks for sharing. Your voice has been heard.

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Lindbergh Hughes 09 October 2009

You rhymed very well...A little bit of sadness and strong feelings! Great work!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 09 October 2009

this is sad indeed..and you have expressed yourself very well

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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 September 2009

from friends to couple from hugs to kisses from laughs to smiles from jokes to love poems...............yet uniquely passionate, utterly persuasive, love reminds mirth of being juxtaposed, a luscious flow across lucidity,10+++, thanks for sharing

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susan brealey

susan brealey

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