poppy miller


Why Did You Forsake Me? - Poem by poppy miller

As the clock struck the half hour
A whisper was heard in the silence deep
To the man, "Why did you forsake me? "
But to the mother, "I love you, do not weep."
The mourners hung their heads and wept
At the sound of the rattling groan
But the man of sin ne'er dared to look
Where the mother stood still and alone.

Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal


Comments about Why Did You Forsake Me? by poppy miller

  • (3/26/2016 1:28:00 PM)


    Thankyou so much for your kind response Kumarmani. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/20/2016 12:12:00 PM)


    Wonderful poem shared on really... (Report) Reply

  • (1/20/2016 11:51:00 AM)


    This is about a wife who lay dying whilst her husband did exactly as he pleased. Though she was sedated with heavy drugs, she knew exactly what was going on and who was at her side all day long. The mother. She asked him with her last breath why he wasn't there in her hours of need and then tells her mother that she loves her, as if to thank her. As she passes away, the mother refuses to stand near him, knowing of his cruelty and he hangs his head with shame, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 20, 2016



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