Why Do I Ache Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Why Do I Ache

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why do i ache.
can you tell me.
and i do when you gently.
i ache.
and knowing this gently, you do.
and even in sleep.
some how, when you gently, i move.
when you softly and gently, i ache.
and behind my eyes, i sleep.
watching the swans, i do.
i ache, watching one neck,
as it gracefully bends.
you do and gently, so gently.
and i in my sleep you state.
and rolling so gently with you, i do.
and i ache across waves, i'm blue.

Saturday, November 14, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: sleep
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 15 November 2009

This was an Ouch poem and brought a tear, because, you describe exactly as I ache, I just try not to know it, but now I'm doomed. Great work, very clever in the repetitition of what makes us ache so...blue, is poetry in true terminal colour Smiling, because I am very good at it! Tai, wishing you a peaceful sunday

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James McLain

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