I love you for giving your heart to
me and trusting me with your pride
I love you for wanting
me and needing me by your side
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so tender, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,10
wonderful feelings of young love........ nice word painting. Well done.10
feelings of love, glides down your lines like a dew drops does on a leaf...........keep goin......sebastine
hey lil gal, amazing poem! ! >..the descriptions are really awesome...loved it a lot...wonderful expressions....gr8 imagery...has all the essense of a poem...keep going..GOOD LUCK! ! ! >. read ma poems nd comment on them wen ur free..bye..take care.
my privious comment was not for the poem.it was for her only so deleted this sry my SLG but you have written so well.....and very much creative.....thanks for nice poem....