Why Do You Do This To Me? Poem by Heartbeat Terrorist

Why Do You Do This To Me?

Rating: 4.0


You have invaded my mind and set up base
I wish i could run but you have already won this chase
My mind needs you to leave but my heart needs you to stay
Please, only you can put my hectic mind at bay

Thoughts of you are the only thing i see
Please just listen to this final plea
Come and go you do as you please
well this is the time you need to be seised

Either you leave my life and nevercome back
Think of this as your final act
Or you stay and listen to all of my cries,
and keep to yourself all of your lies

The choice is yours and yes you must pick
Because the confusion you cause is makeing me sick
I love you i do, which is why i make you choose
Lets just hope this is a battle that i dont lose

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 02 June 2008

This is a good poem to read. It has rhyme and enough rhythm to make it worthwhile. There is quality in places and in other places it could use some revisions, but its fine. GW62

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Sasuke Uchiha 24 May 2008

i like this peom its hard to have to make someone choose but sumtyms u have to

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Catherine Rica Cosico 24 May 2008

Nice write to make a love one have a choice...Pls. try to read my poems Alone and Stay like Summer...thanks

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