Why Don'T I Just Quit? Poem by Mia Ocean

Why Don'T I Just Quit?

Rating: 4.5


The feelings welling inside me,
are bursting with so much rage,
that i ask myself,

'Why don't I just quit? '

I don't have to do this,
so why should I,
just to be let down?

'Why don't I just quit? '

It disheartens me
that i think i shouldn't try
when i really should.
BECAUSE
I can be better and I AM!

'Why don't I just quit? '

Because i know
that quitting isn't what i do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Becky Ginn 07 May 2006

this is so good and because i feel this way sometimes i can really relate to it. Well written and very strong message. Keep those fingers striking the keyboard. All the best Love Becky

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success