Why Don'T You? Poem by Neela Nath Das

Why Don'T You?

Rating: 4.5


When you mock me
when you are in mask,
how can your lover-heart,
commit that- - May I ask?
Technically, you tied
me with your mechanical heart,
Oh! I can sense it
without tracking your part!
I swallow your mockery,
I swallow your hatred,
I swallow every insult,
from you, is it my fate?
Your silence in hateful slang,
your feigned friendship,
slam my throbbing part with bang.
Still, I'm quilting for you,
a patch-work of passion,
love and whatever soft-feelings I have.
They act for you as tender action!
Why don't you go away from
me with tricky ware and apps?
I don't need to stay in you,
with machines and traps!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 18 April 2013

Lots of feelings in this! You got them all across. Good solid write!

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David Wood 11 April 2013

Sounds like you had a bad day! Lovely poem full of feeling. A good write.

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