Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Why Don'T You? Comments

Rating: 4.5

When you mock me
when you are in mask,
how can your lover-heart,
commit that- - May I ask?
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Neela Nath Das
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Theodora Onken 18 April 2013

Lots of feelings in this! You got them all across. Good solid write!

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David Wood 11 April 2013

Sounds like you had a bad day! Lovely poem full of feeling. A good write.

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