Wednesday, December 6, 2006

Why I Fight Comments

Rating: 5.0

From one battle to the next, it feels like nothing ever changes,
Yet we stand our ground, carrying hope through the ages.
America keeps fighting until freedom can breathe,
Until every child is born knowing what it means to believe.
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Daniel Chapman
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Deanna More 29 January 2007

Emotionally charged verse that holds the reader spellbound. Excellent imagery, which is captured by words - so selectively chosen. Portrayed in this poem are feelings (your feelings) that would ensure a Captive Audience, if read aloud. Mr. Chapman, you sure have talent! I wish I had 10 more 'TENS' to give you. Deanna xx .

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Rebeca Valenzuela 21 January 2007

what a powerful poem! !

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