Wednesday, December 14, 2016

Why Pain Never Sings The Aria Comments

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Pain never sings the aria,
Yet it goes up and down,
Voiceless as always in,
One silent drone yet still,
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Sarah Mkhonza
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Richard Wlodarski 19 December 2016

Sarah, this is awesome! ! ! Like the dog that is man's/woman's best friend, so is pain. It teaches us that there is an imbalance in Mind/Body/Spirit. And like The Aria, music soothes the soul and washes away the pain. Great poem! I hope that you will read some of my poetry and feel free with constructive criticism. Thanks again.

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Mj Lemon 15 December 2016

This is absolutely brilliant. Pain may not sing, but it certainly can communicate. And there have been times I have really wished that pain, that unwanted companion, would communicate with someone or something else. A brilliant poem...and you have me thinking about the connection between wisdom and pain. What do the wisdom teeth know? A great poem.

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