Tuesday, August 11, 2009

Why The Famous Muscular Champion Lost? Comments

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He holds the title since a long time in the ring.
But he never expected a defeat
By a feather weight skinny boxer
Who comes from a shanty it seems.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 15 August 2009

Muscles certainly don't 'maketh the man' as you show here so cleverly in this fine poem about the determination and grit of the down-trodden. There is so much more to your poems than appears on first reading. Your soul is in the right place. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sonya Florentino 12 August 2009

great write...his will to win was stronger, it seems!

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Sandra Fowler 11 August 2009

Cheers for the skinny boxer! Righteous anger Is very satisfying to the soul. He needed to win one. Powerful and evocative. Excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra

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