Wildflowers Live On Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Wildflowers Live On

Rating: 5.0


Chickens picking amongst wild flowers.
Undug patches with netting bowers.
Tuberculosis that's running rife.
Sore, scrubbed hands on every wife.

Pebbledash cottages with rotten sills,
Made of dryrot and carpenters bills.
The mantle pops the smell of gas.
Shiny the hob and fenders brass.

Coal from the cellar rises in dust,
While draught through a crevice blows unjust.
The outside room is shaped by many,
In brutal weather and sometimes sunny.

Still the wild flowers live on.

Sally Plumb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Oliver 11 April 2012

Got it- Snap except mine was deep in the countryside. A different world a different age-sigh

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Sally P. P. 24 May 2020

Hi, Michael. We lived in a condemned cottage in the formative part of my life. Shared outside toilet. We were snug in Summer. Winter was a different story. xx

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Dale Mullock 20 July 2010

Wow Sally... This is awesome the flow and wording a treat, the whole poem mellifluous in more ways than one with the honey bees finding those wild flowers! Great imagery of the countryside and old houses here but you bring them to life in such an unusual way but it make it seem so real that you can walk out of the door in to a meadow of wildflowers! Simply superb writing! Dale :)

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Sally P. P. 24 May 2020

My first sensation of wildflowers(I was under two) was convolvulus, A pretty pink, ground hugging little plant. xx

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Raj Arumugam 24 March 2010

Very powerful imagery, Sally; and each line is so well-written

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Sally P. P. 24 May 2020

Thanks for reading my stuff, Raj.

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Sandra Fowler 27 September 2009

Poignant images in every stanza. The wildflowers are God's handiwork. They live under the most diverse conditions, because He tends them. I love to look at the goldenrod growing so richly along my country road.10/10. Love, Sandra

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Sally P. P. 24 May 2020

Hi, Sandra. I thought golden rod was a cultivated plant. Put me right, please. Must look into this. Interesting.

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Catrina Heart 14 March 2009

interesting poem woven with thought provoking verses and great ending rhymes...10+++

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Sally P. P. 24 May 2020

Hello, Catrina, Thanks for your interest. Much appreciated. x

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Haverhill Suffolk England
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