Bijay Kant Dubey


Will People Forget The Spring? From The Terrace And The Corridor Of The Housing Block See I - Poem by Bijay Kant Dubey

From the terrace and the corridor
And the balcony
Of the building
See I
The abnormal rise and fall
In temperature,
The fluctuation,
Abnormal entry and exit
Of the seasons, times,
I doubt
Whether the spring will come or not
Or shall have to move to Mars,
The red planet?

Oh, the concrete buildings leaning
Dangerously together,
V-shaped, cobra buildings,
With the flats above
One after another
And the load beneath
On mother earth,
The skyscrapers, the mansions
And the mechanical life
Pulsating in them,
So many stair cases to fly over,
If the power is,
The lift is the medium
To be down!

Topic(s) of this poem: art


Comments about Will People Forget The Spring? From The Terrace And The Corridor Of The Housing Block See I by Bijay Kant Dubey

  • (8/28/2015 12:04:00 AM)


    I don`t know what this poem is trying to accomplish. Is is wholly about the spring or part this part that? I feel that the central idea is somewhat lost here.

    Go through each line and see what you want to bring to represent the main idea or ideas and try to write from them. You will see that the result will be a much better poem.

    A poem can handle more than one more main idea, but this must be done with mastery never in a loose manner lest the poem seems to be jumping from here to there with no fixed orientation.

    Thanks!

    Luis Estable
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, August 28, 2015


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