Thursday, July 3, 2008

Will You Forgive Me? Comments

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Casey Lyon
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Monica Martinez 28 September 2008

I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! IT'S FILLED WITH SOUL AND FILLED WITH HEART!

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Blue Eyes 27 July 2008

there is no use crying over spilled water, i have to say.but very nice poem tells us to take advantage of our chances before we miss them.very nice

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David Desantis 10 July 2008

extremely sad casey...im so sorry...terrible to lose someone without saying all you want to say. I hope it all gets easier.

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~ Jon London ~ 03 July 2008

Very emotional piece Casey...it's always sad when we wish that we had more time with someone, just to say what our hearts wish to express...but when we don't..it's that painful reminder that hurts us so deeply....lovely poem yet so painfully penned best wishes..................keep expressing Jon.

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 July 2008

I love the way this sentiment. The emotion was just right as expressed and tha is hard. I really felt for the writer. Well done. GW62

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