live to die

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Poem by live to die

As I watch you
suffering
I cry in the rain
so no one can see my pain
I'd give my life to make you
feel better
I'd give everything even my life just
to see you happy
If that what I have to do to see
you happy so be it
goodbye no more pain to share


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  • Efrain Leyva (8/8/2009 11:06:00 PM)

    great poem it's
    make mee cry! ! !
    good work! ! !(Report)Reply

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  • Writing Until My Fingers Bl33d (6/25/2008 8:37:00 PM)

    all of your poems are short but really good. you're able to express yourself in only a couple lines and not alot of people can do that.(Report)Reply

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  • Tyease CollinsTyease Collins (6/23/2008 6:18:00 PM)

    I wish i was whoever you wrote this for. So much emotion and just...death in it.

    Lovely(Report)Reply

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  • Arabian Heart (6/23/2008 8:59:00 AM)

    maybe they cry
    because you cry
    so why not stop the crying
    for other people will cry too

    i am an empath so i will cry to(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 4, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 27, 2011