Window Poem by live to die

Window

Rating: 5.0


As I watch you
suffering
I cry in the rain
so no one can see my pain
I'd give my life to make you
feel better
I'd give everything even my life just
to see you happy
If that what I have to do to see
you happy so be it
goodbye no more pain to share

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Efrain Leyva 08 August 2009

great poem it's make mee cry! ! ! good work! ! !

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all of your poems are short but really good. you're able to express yourself in only a couple lines and not alot of people can do that.

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Tyease Collins 23 June 2008

I wish i was whoever you wrote this for. So much emotion and just...death in it. Lovely

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Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

maybe they cry because you cry so why not stop the crying for other people will cry too i am an empath so i will cry to

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