Window 'Pain' Poem by Naomi Hartnell

Window 'Pain'

Rating: 4.2


You look at her,
She's lost the will,
Her desperation bleeds her,
In her eye's you can feel,
A pain that burns much deeper.

And as you stand,
And watch a while,
Her eyes they stare,
Right through you.
Bewildered how you've,
Become this girl,
A reflection in the window.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
josef david 09 October 2007

i really liked the end i didnt see it coming :)

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