poet Naomi Hartnell

Naomi Hartnell

Window 'Pain'

You look at her,
She's lost the will,
Her desperation bleeds her,
In her eye's you can feel,
A pain that burns much deeper.

And as you stand,
And watch a while,
Her eyes they stare,
Right through you.
Bewildered how you've,
Become this girl,
A reflection in the window.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 9, 2007
Poem Edited: Friday, April 15, 2011

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Comments about Window 'Pain' by Naomi Hartnell

  • josef david (10/9/2007 12:36:00 PM)

    i really liked the end i didnt see it coming :)

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