Winter Flame Poem by Louis Cecile

Winter Flame

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Winter Flame brings new essence

Don’t leave effervescent

Surround my favourite pronoun enflame

Your tongue releases words showing much pain

Take flight and soar

I love you ever more

The beauty that nurtures free

Future I can see

Spring arrives you seek to depart

Summer’s here broken hearts

A winter flame must diminish

Am I duly finished

Winter comes I am frozen

A love so blind my heart is broken

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 April 2012

Excellent rhyming...finish is jocund ~ 'A love so blind my heart is broken' ~ anti-climax...poetic twist great work thanks for sharing Regards ~ niv tenner

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