Which Love Poem by Louis Cecile

Which Love

Rating: 5.0


Two loves different

Yet they remain indifferent

I can’t stand in the way

The way they react ready to attack

Me in the middle now in the back

Torn between the two

What am I to do

Take one side the other calls me a fool

If I sacrifice one what have I become

This situation has left me feeling so numb

I am young and dumb

Chose the wrong one

On the Day of Judgment my punishment will come

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 April 2012

Indeed in dilemma in triangular love poet in buffering zone...good concept and worded...thanks for sharing regards ~ niv tenner

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Rekha Mandagere 19 July 2011

Great dilemma of life this or that is always challenging us. But here, it is not just a material pursuit it is rather spiritual pursuit. Both the forms are beautiful and valuable. One should balance the both and there is no need to sacrifice one for the other. It is hihly educative. Marks 10

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