Rating: 4.8

You can never lose that part of you

Our hearts were beating as one

You nourished me made a home for me

When I gazed upon you I cried

For a moment I needed to return inside

Bringing comfort

So much to teach

Longing for speech

You make me stand tall even when I fall

Our lives together

Eternal connection

That cannot be broken even in separation

Not just for set backs

You are my inspiration

Through my creation

Though I fail often to show it

You are my devotion

Shalini Samuel 18 October 2010

Birth recalled once again.... Mother is really the greatest of Gods creation... Everyone love's their mother...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 September 2010

‘You are my devotion’ ~ Yeah agree Mother ~ Mother ~ Mother noting can fill the blanks Without Mother everything is blank and bland…great tribute to Mother… thanks for sharing Hon'ble Poet Louis Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 March 2010

A good mothers day piece.

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Booklover Tv Lounger 07 March 2010

Lovely. Words that speak volumes of the bonds between parent and child. Great work and keep it up: D -SJD

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Vipins Puthooran 01 October 2011

Devoted expression and heartfelt thoughts... (Our lives together, Eternal connection) ....really great... Excellent poem...

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Allemagne Roßmann 18 September 2011

Birth of an aspiring great poet here

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Rekha Mandagere 19 July 2011

Great tribute to all mothers! Your expression is very humble and catches every reader. Nice poem. I love the sweetness of this poem.

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Dave Dafes 08 March 2011

This is a true expressing of a devotion to a mother and a tribute to all mothers..What could we have done without them? And forever our hearts will eternally be in harmony

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 05 March 2011

the ever amazing feeling is when a mom sees her child for the first time.

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