Birth Poem by Louis Cecile


Rating: 4.8

You can never lose that part of you

Our hearts were beating as one

You nourished me made a home for me

When I gazed upon you I cried

For a moment I needed to return inside

Bringing comfort

So much to teach

Longing for speech

You make me stand tall even when I fall

Our lives together

Eternal connection

That cannot be broken even in separation

Not just for set backs

You are my inspiration

Through my creation

Though I fail often to show it

You are my devotion

Booklover Tv Lounger 07 March 2010

Lovely. Words that speak volumes of the bonds between parent and child. Great work and keep it up: D -SJD

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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 March 2010

A good mothers day piece.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 September 2010

‘You are my devotion’ ~ Yeah agree Mother ~ Mother ~ Mother noting can fill the blanks Without Mother everything is blank and bland…great tribute to Mother… thanks for sharing Hon'ble Poet Louis Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Shalini Samuel 18 October 2010

Birth recalled once again.... Mother is really the greatest of Gods creation... Everyone love's their mother...

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Vipins Puthooran 01 October 2011

Devoted expression and heartfelt thoughts... (Our lives together, Eternal connection) ....really great... Excellent poem...

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Allemagne Roßmann 18 September 2011

Birth of an aspiring great poet here

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Rekha Mandagere 19 July 2011

Great tribute to all mothers! Your expression is very humble and catches every reader. Nice poem. I love the sweetness of this poem.

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Dave Dafes 08 March 2011

This is a true expressing of a devotion to a mother and a tribute to all mothers..What could we have done without them? And forever our hearts will eternally be in harmony

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 05 March 2011

the ever amazing feeling is when a mom sees her child for the first time.

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