Winter Has Turned In Japan Poem by wabi sabi

Winter Has Turned In Japan

Rating: 5.0


Closet/beginning to feel winter clothes heavy
Train/went out to find out spring
Lake/some boats floating empty
Jizo Statue/covered with moss in vividly deep green
Roofs/in the morning light
Benches/people lunching
Cafe/sunset seen between the blinds
Stationary/my niece starting elementary
Frog/as green as cabbage
Station/an elder lady in a baby pink dress
Sofa/kitty yawning on my chest with me
Boyfriend/here to amend over the fight last night


The day light has begun to give off something new.

Wednesday, February 1, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: niece,boyfriend,frog,green,pink,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Deeks 10 March 2012

Wonderful snapshots of micro observations. I particularly liked the reference to a previous nights fight as it seems to suggest part of lifes cycle... Karen

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Elena Sandu 04 February 2012

This is a lovely write dear friend, your insights are beautiful, inconveniet things are mentioned in such a kind manner with a great charm. I enjoyed this beaty, thank you for share.

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Ramesh Rai 01 February 2012

your every day should begin with a new, nice poem, liked it.

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