first comet


Winter Moods - Poem by first comet

The cold long winter left me weary
The alpha men’s ideals has made me leery
I want to hatch this shell and be exposed
To break the sphere I’ve been enclosed

To experience the old familiar afresh
To redefine my coordinates on this mesh
To travel down many creeks like a fish
Or like a flying kite that makes a swish

With you I want to shed (share) a tear my dear
I want this life o’vanity to disappear
I want to have this foggy head all clear
I can no longer run this show on fear!


Comments about Winter Moods by first comet

  • (5/11/2008 12:20:00 PM)

    It's very hard to write a poem in which every line ends in end-rhyme without it sounding forced. You have succeeded magificently. Nice poem about resolution and change. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 11, 2008


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