Winter Night Comments

go outside and be a ghost and shiver to unforgiving cold. md. lovely poem

'The slow movement of people, Makes me to think about ghost, With white dress and sharp teeth, Made me to afraid and scared, But winter is always special.' O how nice is the last stanza, beauatiful imagery.

I like those last few lines - great

your winter landscapes descriptions could have been improvised...........better and make it shivers right to the spines butta, a virgin piece is always nice n sweet.keep writing bro.! ! ! A+ and 10