Saturday, August 16, 2008

Wishing She Were Mine Comments

Rating: 4.0

She’s undefined, she’s gorgeous,
She’s everything I need.
She’s menacing and evil,
And she loves it when I bleed.
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Keifer Johnson
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Greenwolfe 1962 20 August 2008

I thought this was written pretty well and I recommend it. GW62

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Stacey Watts 16 August 2008

This is a fantastic poem. So very powerful and moving. It also flows extremely well.

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Audrey Stephenson 16 August 2008

Aw... that's incredibly sweet. I'm sure if you stay as endearing as you are right now you'll find love. The trick is you just have to stop searching.

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Keifer Johnson

Keifer Johnson

Longmont Colorado
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