Friday, December 30, 2005

With Child Comments

Rating: 2.8

By the time she reads this
I'll be in Alabama.
I ate the ham and pasta stew
and cleaned the fridge
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Ernestine Northover 30 December 2005

Now this one I like Herbert, very well thought out and put together. Lovely write. Sort of sentimental, casual but with a unknown destination to it. Thanks. Love Ernestine XXX

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Mary Nagy 30 December 2005

This is wonderful..........I don't have the ability to get into other ''characters'' like you do. I think that's a great skill. Great poem! sincerely, Mary

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