Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 673,593 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With Determination - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

With determination

I tried to hold old eyes
But failed despite earnest try
I thought it better to lose old vision
Amidst fear and confusion

So doctor advised me to go for
Lose old vision without feeling sore
I thought about leaves
And decided to live

May be good for me and readers
If I write with colored spectacles on
To see the colored world
In it is new fold

What could I find?
The and people were so kind
Eager to find solutions
With so much of good relations

I thanked doctor
For granting me new color
New vision
With determination

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 31, 2016



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