With Importance Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Importance

Rating: 5.0


“If you are here, where is divinity”?
One of well known poetess asked in continuity
“The moment you feel part of nobility” I added
“Seriously feel touch of serenity with flavor” and concluded:

Sometimes we are over zealous
It not that we want to become famous
There is an internal urge
For soul to act and purge

It comes with noble act
When you feel with each part
Insects, animals and human alike
You love all and like

This makes you happy
As kindness is with you already
Only you want to near holy sprit
Admire it within and greet

You are viewing it with importance
As you are not living with distance
You are aligned fully with internal light
You wish no more to struggle and fight

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 October 2013

“If you are here, where is divinity”? One of well known poetess asked in continuity

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2013

Bu Magda, Kodwo Hybrid and 2 others like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike user imageDeletejadia4708au

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2013

Hasmukh Mehta welcome doc saab a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2013

Another good poem Hasmukh! about a minute ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2013

Infinite Love much appreciated...The way its articulated is wonderful. I think I would be looking my life in a different way loving myself.... Unlike · Reply · 1 · 10 hours ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2013

Re: With importance (Score: 1) by Seshat_Nibada on Monday, October 07,2013 (22: 43: 05) You know Jadia, this would have sounded great in Sanskrit. There are glimmers of something very poetic here, which I can appreciate. The rhyming did not feel forced and the Brahmin (arrogance) sounded more like translated from Bengali but captured something of the vedic consciousness just the same. I felt the power of renunciation and surrender to shakti throughout.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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