With Love Seeds Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Love Seeds

Rating: 5.0


Blood needs transfusion
With no confusion
Hatred must be removed
Peace must be moved in

Eyes must see
And act like tree
Provide fruits and shed
The kindness must be led

Humanity at large needs change
Centuries have passed since ages
We have witnessed bloodshed and hatred
Millions have perished and many awaits death

Let us move with peach torch
Some of the areas need attention as such
Let religion and ideology stay where it is
Let us plaugh the land with love seeds

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

veri nice M KODEESWARAN27 minutes ago very nice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

wow hemu gupta31 minutes ago love seeds Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Powerful Phil Gross16 minutes ago The halting words mask a particularly gruesome truth, and at first i was put off a bit, but now feel it provides the quality of terror and intense grief one might image when your whole world is turned upside down. The shaking and spurting of half sentences reminded me of the short choppy bursts of language used while utting phrases like What... happened? I was just... my friends... GONE!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Blood needs transfusion With no confusion

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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