Sunday, May 14, 2006

With Tools Like These..... Comments

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As darkness fell, out in the shed
the tools and spiders went to bed.
Said, with a sigh, the brickie's Hammer
'I am the king', but, with a stammer,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 14 May 2006

Oh that's right, Herbs, rub it all the way in about me and my Hammers, see if I care! ! And I'll tell you something else: WE WUZ ROBBED! ! ! Puzzled? Ask my mate Vincent Turner (or take a stroll through the forum) As our Vikram below says, your poem here is imaginative, creative, and a whole lot of fun. You should have a book, Herbsy. Have a good week. Gina.

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nice imagination, very well written, nice poem.

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