With You Poem by Black Love

With You

Rating: 5.0


I woke up in a dream today,
to a cold night in hell.
I watch how to the moon sits in the sky,
and how I stand in the dark alone.

I remember back then who you were.
You use to be calm, used to be strong,
Used to be generous.
The memory won’t escape me.

Even thought you so close to me, your still so distant.
Is there nothing I can do to bring you back?
Have I not try so hard?

I remember those three important words you said to me,
like it was yesterday.
Now, despair keeps on knocking on my door.
I hide this pain so well.

Even if you’re not with me
I’m with you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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