Withered Cliff Face Poem by Kevin Patrick

Withered Cliff Face

Rating: 5.0


a withered cliff face
pierced on a north bay highway
lines times hieroglyphs

Friday, August 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: canada
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 08 September 2018

Part 2. Part Two. Ooops. I will try to give you a 10 but I have noticed that PH prefers to dump a thousand ads in the scroll in front of the voting booth and then the scroll is so long you cannot get it to stand still long enough to vote before it gets submerged by ads again

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Susan Williams 08 September 2018

very good Haiku- -the image powerful and I love the use of hieroglyphs to deepen the imagery. I give it a 10! ! ! ! !

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Valsa George 03 September 2018

'Times hieroglyphics.'...! Lovely expression! A beautiful haiku! A 10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2018

Such a great haiku, Kevin....10++++

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