Within Poem by Charcoal Bullet

Within

Rating: 5.0


You pray to solve your outer damage
there is no words explains this pain
behind the mirror - time goes savage
insight the darkness - comes insane

my inner wall last night drank poison
and cigarette breaks in the face
I have never felt - being chosen
to desperate of searching place

open wounds delayed in sutures
love mixed with the shouting wind
we are travelers, doomed for searching
something that we could not describe

irresolute dream will cause sorrow
then heart has a leak at the edge
time to say forgive and sorry
burning love like native page

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

wonderful write.. perfectly written and full of thoughts and emotions

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Ian Bowen 08 March 2009

Well written piece. Much enjoyed.10/10 Ian

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