Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Without Pause Comments

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Concentric circles spinning to central rage
fomented and fed with every glance
Hostile bigotry condemning
without cause.
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tess fielders
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Dom N. Kafley 20 January 2010

Hi Tess, very well penned and fluent poem. i liked it.

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Jerry Hughes 22 December 2009

Excellent Tess, not a word wasted. Fondly, Jerry

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Nikunj Sharma 22 December 2009

very subtle yet loaded with deep meaning. short sweet and stimulating too....great write

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