Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 382,636 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Without Tension - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Without tension

I tested her skill
It was not clear still
She was adamant
But very prompt with her comment

She might have reservation
For keeping friendly relation
But it was simply a conversation
For better understanding and foundation

I enjoyed her presence of mind
To the point and no let up to find
It is one of the rarest qualities
That you come across with an opportunity

It is good to have face to face talk
And deny any access before dog barks
It may turn unpleasant if one tries to be disrespectful
The friendship runs into rough weather to be called shameful

I shall express “Thank you”
For being true
And telling about real intention
One must respect views without building tension

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/24/2015 2:20:00 AM)


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/24/2015 2:05:00 AM)


    I shall express “Thank you”
    For being true
    And telling about real intention
    One must respect views without building tension
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 24, 2015



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