Thursday, June 2, 2011

Without You. Comments

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Without you i drown in my own sorrow.
Without you my soul grows deeper of depression.
Without you my heart slowly shrivels up until it is
Nothing but a pile of dust.
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Ashleigh Root
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Ashleigh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Elizabeth Grace 08 August 2011

Good poem. :) I hope you continue writing.

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Amber S 08 August 2011

is your poem about a dad or boyfriend being in the army? either way it is a good poem keep writing! ! ! amber

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Nellie Roop 02 June 2011

dad or boyfriend in the military?

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