Without you i drown in my own sorrow.
Without you my soul grows deeper of depression.
Without you my heart slowly shrivels up until it is
Nothing but a pile of dust.
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is your poem about a dad or boyfriend being in the army? either way it is a good poem keep writing! ! ! amber
A good start with a nice poem, Ashleigh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.