jen capaldi

Without You

I miss you
Your own selfish pride
Your hubris and narcissism
Is what made you go away
Now I'm comdemmed
To an existence without you
Tortured by the memories
Of the love and happiness
The warmth and love in your embrace
That which I have lost
Haunts me every night and every day
Pain and sorrow has taken it's place
Pain and sorrow I did not desire
Along with fear of being unworthy of love
Alone forever
Never to understand
What I did wrong
Will I ever know
Why you went away
Is it possible you could one day return to my embrace
Because I will love you forever
And I cannot bear the cost of the loss of you

Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 23, 2009

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Comments about Without You by jen capaldi

  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (10/25/2009 3:44:00 PM)

    Nice melancholy with touch of oozing love for fiancée
    Ten to cheer up your fiancée. LOL!
    dr.sakti.

    Please read and comment
    Only Love
    Amnesia series
    ds.

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  • Eyan Desir (10/10/2009 4:13:00 PM)

    You will live ok
    Live and love
    good write

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  • Tharindu AtukoralaTharindu Atukorala (10/2/2009 11:27:00 PM)

    I enjoy your writing, you speak from the heart, and your emotions are very well expressed...

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    Will I ever know
    Why you went away
    Is it possible you could one day return to my embrace
    Because I will love you forever
    And I cannot bear the cost of the loss of you...... u have betrayed me totally.. what a feeling inthe poem..superb. it has touched me all the way...10

    read mine miss i miss u..mary is going to marry...all dreams not come true

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