Renee Russon

Without You - Poem by Renee Russon

Without you there is no day
Without you there is no night
Only darkness through the mists of time
Without you there is no dawn
No sunrise just pain
No rain, only storm
Drowning in tears
The years
Know no difference
Without you I just exist
To eat, to live, to weep
My soul you keep
Without you there is only...I
Alone, in a desert,
Under a burning sky

Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain

Comments about Without You by Renee Russon

  • Winter Wyte (2/5/2016 12:12:00 PM)

    i love that- Without you there is only...I (Report) Reply

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  • (6/28/2015 3:00:00 PM)

    A total aloneness, like wandering through the desert with no solace to be found. Without you I just exist, very apt description of lost love. Beautiful poem taking us down the path of darkness after love has disappeared into the sunset on another horizon. Tender words to be remembered in the future. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • (3/6/2015 2:42:00 AM)

    Thank you all for reading my poems. I Appreciate your lovely commentd (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (9/3/2014 3:08:00 PM)

    An expression of limitless and endless love. A lovely piece. (Report) Reply

  • (8/28/2014 6:29:00 PM)

    A cry from the heart - I suspect a woman, perhaps of a certain age has written this poem. She is intelligent and erudite, regrets the passing of time and maybe yearns for a long lost love. Very moving and timeless. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/28/2014 4:38:00 PM)

    a touching love poem without you there is no dawn (Report) Reply

    Rose Russon (8/28/2014 5:29:00 PM)

    Thank you for reading my poem, that's a powerful line

  • Aries Profanisaurus (8/27/2014 6:39:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Am very surprised that I am the first on to comment on it considering how good it is. It's amazing how different things feel when you are with someone. Stay strong and hopefully you will not be alone for much longer (Report) Reply

    Rose Russon (8/28/2014 5:30:00 PM)

    Thank you for reading my poems John glad you like them

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, July 21, 2014

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