Tuesday, April 5, 2005

Wolves In The Wind (5-29-03) Comments

Rating: 4.5

The wind is like a wolf.
It howls at the windows,
and scratches at the door
with dead branches
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Kayla Jarnac
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Peter A. Crowther 05 May 2005

Original and nice sentiment. At end of first stanza I would suggest 'on the moor' rather than 'at the moor'

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