Wednesday, October 5, 2016

Woman, A Heavenly Creation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Being gifted to be emotional,
Woman is always at the receiving end,
Being gifted to be more sensible,
Man always takes advantage of that.
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Jyoti Patil
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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 January 2022

Madam, you are absolutely correct! This is general but not specific. I liked your expression, 'She mostly has a rough path to tread upon, She is wonderfully gifted with moral strength, She is God's wonderful creation'....top score and to my favorite.

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Chinedu Dike 05 October 2016

An insightful depiction of the essence of womanhood, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. A lovely tribute to women elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Jyoti. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 05 October 2016

think about.. :) Thanks for sharing

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