Tuesday, January 9, 2018

Womb To Tomb Comments

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I saw a person for the first time
There was none likeher most dear to me
At first sight of me, she forgot herself
At first word of mine, She is so thrilled
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PASALA VIDYA SAGAR
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 April 2019

She was there when I was in the womb exceptional start new pet do Read my MOM'S SMILES ALL YOUR LIFE YOU WILL IMBIBE AS YOU LOVE UR MOM as I once did and still do you will also so do

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 April 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Pasala Vidya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2018

An adorable poem and a great tribute to your mother.......She smiled, I smiled, She walked, I walked She cried I cried, I cried then she cried....Liked the touching expression! You may like to read my poem 'Ode to My Conscience'...Thank you

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Amit Narayan Satpathy 11 January 2018

Great mother Your emotions are indeed hear touching And they can warm even the coldest hearts, Pasala! !

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Frank Adie 09 January 2018

Straight from the heart. Emotion packed. A great start.

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Pasala Vidya sagar 10 January 2018

Thank you Frank Adie...

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 January 2018

She smiled, I smiled, She walked, I walked She cried I cried, I cried then she cried..... a living praise to the loving mother...... very nice poem.. thank you. tony

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Pasala Vidya sagar 10 January 2018

Thank you Dr. Tony

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