Tuesday, May 1, 2018

Wonder Of Youth Comments

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WONDER OF YOUTH
We all pass through three phases of life
Childhood, youth and old age
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mamutty CHOLA
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Robert Murray Smith 01 May 2018

Your topic gave you a wide scope. Where is middle age? The poem needs a rewrite and a direction.

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Mamutty Chola 02 May 2018

Dear Mr Robert Greetigs Your suggestions well taken. But the theme of the poem is youth wonder not old age. Remain in touch. I believe sharing is gaining. Givers are always gainers. wish you a very pleasant day. Remember me in in your prayers, .regards

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